... an ongoing story ... Hello!
For those who read the blog from time to time, have not disappeared: P
I decided not to write until the beginning of September, when I should have some response, but since I started writing new stuff, as usual I went from here to say it XD
almost always write in this blog about the things that my passion is not so much because I have someone who wants to read, but only to tell me too same, what happens. It 's true, my friends are often to listen, but I do not really like get into specifics, go on too long, because I fear to be bored, and so here I am writing in order to. A place where those who want to be read, not as a private journal, and from which I read out the same day.
But let us, what am I doing? Well, a lot. It 's a time when I can not write every day, and even if I go out, like today, till late at night, when I have to sit down and jot down anything of any kind.
I am particularly pleased with what is coming out the first draft of the second volume of the book that I sent to publishers. Were added many details, many alternative ways, and now is particularly rich. For now, it reminds me a lot when I started writing the first volume, and if I can make it the same way, then great! I am happy with what I wrote yesterday: it was a beautiful scene, a key scene in the beginning. I described a place twice, the first in Volume I, Volume II in the second, but in a totally different, a different perception. I really liked it, I really enjoyed it! Perhaps those who do not understand what he writes can be funny, but on the contrary, who knows what it can smile. This is just to say that I'm not crazy fun in places that do not exist to describe
XD I have a lot to continue drafting. Currently, I have finished the first chapter, and are almost midway through the second. Maybe in a few months, we will have to add something, but for now it's okay. I waited a bit, 'because I did not want to return now in the hands of the old characters, having just finished the first book in February of this year, so I started new things, I've taken some vecchissme, but then I went them, and I liked to find. They were there waiting for me, as I say, "Well, do not leave me here! Let me go and finish my adventure!", So I said to myself that I should oblige.
Meanwhile, I started a new story, maybe I had already discussed in other previous blog, but it was still only a vague idea. Now there is a sort of plot, two parallel stories that come up at some point. Then there is a kind of clutter that I do not know how to solve. In the meantime, I started to schwa what I already liked this story, then we'll see. This is a sci-fiction, with ships (but do not go into space, but fly only), cars, guns, etc., and there is a sort of adventure with an unexpected in the middle. There are two young men, belonging to two different worlds, and for the first time I am devoting a quarrelsome couple. In fact, it is not the first time, because you already wrote a similar thing, but in this book is the pair principals to be involved. Too bad there are not many elements to close the plot, because it's a great story to write in the summer. There is much sea and islands ...
very old story is a romance and some very psychological 'thriller (pink for harmony XD but I do not mean a story that focuses on the romantic type of relationship between two main characters and two thousand vicissitudes of their difficult lives). I began to write it straight off, but rereading it today I realize it's terrible. The first draft is really bitter, I am in some places had the shakes from what my syntax was bad years ago. Certain words are now out of my vocabulary just because I find them crude and I do not sound more congenial. On the other hand first I wrote just for me and for a maximum of one or two people who wanted to read. Now, I realize, I write for others. It is one thing clear, that is, I really like to forget the passage of time and adventures with the characters I created, otherwise I would not do, but the aim is that for which others can also follow those tracks. When I write a scene that involved me particularly, I say "who knows when they read this." Previously was not interested so if a scene had little graceful words, or if the sentence was not built to perfection, so it was not something I wanted to be read and appreciated. I had only had out of my head. Not any more, I became a perfectionist. I read and reread sentences, as a sculptor who removes and adjusts its image before it is ready. It 's more difficult, but the result is more satisfying. So
will take up this old story and settle down. This might seem like an easy job, but having already started, I can say that it is not, because I have the unfortunate tendency to preserve. My brain does not want to understand that if the sentence disgusts me the need to delete and edit, but try to fix it, sometimes making it even more horrible ... and it takes twice the time. Sooner or later it will end, anyway.
Well, now it's late, I think I'll go to sleep ... I hope to reopen the blog, next time, to write something about it: P
Basin! *
